10 thoughts on “TYPEWRITTEN POEM 13

  1. Miranda Stone July 22, 2014 / 3:35 pm

    I love this! The pairing of the words “quiet throng” make me do a double take, and I like how you set up that last line.

    • markrenney2 July 23, 2014 / 6:03 pm

      Thanks Miranda.

  2. diahannreyes July 22, 2014 / 9:35 pm

    So true. I’m with Miranda. Really appreciated the contrast presented with “quiet throng” – made me really hear the silence when the separation happens. Really hit me.

    • markrenney2 July 23, 2014 / 6:06 pm

      I typed this a few weeks ago and initially wasn’t sure about it but it does seem to have achieved some impact. Thanks Diahann.

  3. chrisnelson61 July 23, 2014 / 7:55 am

    Agreed! And how very ‘English’ too the polite queue subduing excitement.

    • markrenney2 July 23, 2014 / 6:08 pm

      Yes, the galleries and exhibitions can often feel a little daunting as we assume others are experts. Thanks Chris.

    • markrenney2 July 23, 2014 / 6:09 pm

      So pleased!

    • markrenney2 July 26, 2014 / 7:45 pm

      Thank s John!

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