TYPEWRITTEN POEM 14

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19 thoughts on “TYPEWRITTEN POEM 14

  1. Miranda Stone August 3, 2014 / 3:51 pm

    Very original form to this poem, and an intriguing message.

    • markrenney2 August 3, 2014 / 8:18 pm

      I started this series by posting poems written, over the years, on various electric typewriters then I decided to add new poems and so bought an old manual typewriter on which to continue. Glad you like this one.

      • Miranda Stone August 3, 2014 / 10:44 pm

        That is so cool, Mark. I love old-fashioned typewriters. (When I was a girl, I discovered the one my mom had used to type her papers for college, and it became a prized possession for me.)

      • markrenney2 August 4, 2014 / 2:38 pm

        I know exactly what you mean Miranda. I believe all old typewriters truly have a story to tell if only they could type without us.

  2. Geo Sans August 3, 2014 / 4:21 pm

    you are
    not a drop
    in the ocean
    ~
    you are
    the entire ocean
    in a drop
    ~
    Rumi

    • markrenney2 August 3, 2014 / 8:21 pm

      I found these words familiar but did not know of the author – I do now that you have introduced me. Thanks for the comment, regards Mark.

    • markrenney2 August 6, 2014 / 6:32 pm

      TON-YOU
      H
      A
      N
      K

  3. chrisnelson61 August 4, 2014 / 7:44 am

    And, for me, this poem emphasises the Human condition, and perhaps our social conditioning, in that the ‘great waves’ (of youtful promise) always seem to evade us, being replaced by bitter regret.
    Sorry, that sounds maudlin! Great poem, Mark!

    • markrenney2 August 4, 2014 / 2:45 pm

      Both this and Devices are borne out of the anger I feel when I see the news from Gaza, hence the darkness but I do also try to write with a duality to reflect also the personal.

  4. Pam Huggins August 4, 2014 / 12:20 pm

    The visual combined with the words (arrangement comes to mind) is powerful. Love this!

    • markrenney2 August 6, 2014 / 6:34 pm

      Thanks Pam – pleased you like words and design!

  5. littledogslaughed August 4, 2014 / 2:21 pm

    Wow! A powerful thought emphasized more by the visual-I love your typewritten poems!

    • markrenney2 August 6, 2014 / 6:35 pm

      Thank you so much!

  6. diahannreyes August 5, 2014 / 2:43 pm

    Enjoyed the words and the unexpected format, Mark- seemed to create multiple meanings – dripping and then ripping into discontent.

    • markrenney2 August 6, 2014 / 6:36 pm

      Your comment is much appreciated as is your analysis. Thank you.

  7. grevisangel73 April 21, 2017 / 8:04 am

    Really nice, innovative, and the message is clear.

    • markrenney2 April 21, 2017 / 3:50 pm

      Thank you.

      • grevisangel73 April 24, 2017 / 12:36 pm

        As always Mark, you are welcome. I have been trying to catch up with every ones blogs.

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