PROSE ROAD PR8

Sign of the Times-0103 Image by Christine Renney

The loneliness
Is between the where
And between the tear

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16 thoughts on “PROSE ROAD PR8

    • markrenney1 March 14, 2015 / 8:31 pm

      Thank you so much!

  1. chrisnelson61 March 13, 2015 / 10:26 pm

    Now this is clever use of language, Mark, to take the rhyme of ‘where’ (as in belonging) and ‘tear’ and then imply ‘tear’ as ‘tea’ (as in crying for the loss of belonging), if that makes sense to you! An emotional and sensitive piece. Great work!

    • markrenney1 March 14, 2015 / 8:33 pm

      You are making perfect sense. Christine and I had that very conversation so really pleased it was effective. Thanks Chris.

    • markrenney1 March 14, 2015 / 8:33 pm

      That really pleased me and thank you Pepperanne.

  2. Tony Single March 14, 2015 / 12:49 pm

    The play on words going on at the end of the second and third line… nice! 😉

    • markrenney1 March 14, 2015 / 8:35 pm

      Thanks Tony – as I said to Chris Nelson I am pleased people have responded as I’d hoped.

  3. diahannreyes March 15, 2015 / 1:51 am

    Great- both to the visual and the double meanings to the words. The empty spaces, the cracks– lots of room for loneliness there.

    • markrenney1 March 16, 2015 / 8:05 pm

      A great comment Diahann! Thank you.

  4. megdekorne March 16, 2015 / 9:07 pm

    Mark , I really love this too ! I’m always trying to use less words with more meaning like you do so beautifully here . Xxxmeg

    • markrenney1 March 17, 2015 / 4:50 pm

      Thank you so much Meg.

  5. sheldonk2014 April 11, 2015 / 6:36 am

    I love this one,short and to the point
    I am now following you
    See you soon Sheldon

    • markrenney1 April 11, 2015 / 2:50 pm

      Thanks Sheldon. Regards Mark.

  6. Mary Strong-Spaid April 11, 2015 / 5:29 pm

    Like a lightning strike embedded in the wall…
    it’s energy long gone.

    • markrenney1 April 12, 2015 / 1:35 pm

      Thank you so much Mary. Regards Mark

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