AFTER MIDNIGHT

Christine and I have a new post on ‘Hijacked Amygdala’, a site well worth visiting to pick up on the work of other, impassioned creators.

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Chris R-0763 Image by Christine Renney

We are both eloquent when cruel and each determined to undermine the other. But my drinking has begun to take its toll and I am now at a disadvantage. We have been like this for hours and it is still early, just seven in the evening.
Clara shows no sign of flagging. In a loose fitting and shapeless cotton dress, her skinny frame almost entirely engulfed, she rages. Bloated from the beer and in my too tight trousers I feel naked, exposed. I close my eyes and try to concentrate on the words she hurls so effortlessly, time and again hitting the mark and, although I am unable to respond, I am impressed with Clara’s performance.
Her dialogue is worthy of Cassavetes or Carver, sparse yet unsparing. If only I could rise to the challenge but what would be the point? In the morning I won’t…

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2 thoughts on “AFTER MIDNIGHT

  1. chrisnelson61 June 7, 2016 / 6:43 pm

    As you know, I think this is a fine piece – very thought-provoking.

    • markrenney2 June 8, 2016 / 5:51 am

      Thanks Chris.

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