Christine and I have a new post on Hijacked Amygdala.

hijacked amygdala

Chris R-1147-3.jpg Image by Christine Renney

Her claim on this room
Is a slow habit
A fissure
Not in the ice
Nor in the rock
But at the window
Obstructing his view

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4 thoughts on “BREAKING

  1. chrisnelson61 March 27, 2017 / 9:14 pm

    To me this is as a ghost, someone long since lost, whose spirit exerts its presence. A thought-provoking image, Mark, and a sort of surreal image too.

    • markrenney2 March 28, 2017 / 3:24 pm

      Thank you Chris.

  2. Jana H White March 28, 2017 / 1:55 pm

    It really is that someone can “claim” a room, fill space, even a whole house because they do much of their “living” there. (or brooding?) It’s palpable. The emotional content of this piece Mark, using the words “ice” and “rock” perhaps to give the flavor of relationship is highly effective and so well crafted. The last line is a zinger! I may not be getting this as you intended but I love the tangible weightiness of this piece.

    • markrenney2 March 29, 2017 / 3:36 pm

      Thank you Jana. Such an insightful comment. I really do appreciate it.

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